Tuesday, January 19, 2010

down to 1,318 incidents in from 1,515 and asaults down 10 per cent from 1,557; SPikes were seen in the number sexual assaults

Problems exist in 24H Vancouver's "2009 a safe year, stats say" on January 18, 2010. Above, in doesn't seem to belong, and a rewrite of that entire sentence seems necessary. That's followed up with

a missing word: of between number and sexual.

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