Wednesday, August 11, 2010

the same park where where a folk singer was killed

There is is an extra word in "Coyote attacks camper in N.S." in today's 24H Vancouver. This is the entire article. Would you agree with me if I suggested that the third sentence should be moved up to become the second sentence? The way it is now makes it seems like the folk singer who was killed went to the hospital for stitches, when surely it's the 16-year-old girl who was bit on Monday who went to the hospital for stitches.

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