The first error I noticed in this article ("Network using LinkedIn" in yesterday's 24H Vancouver) was the colon - why is it there? The sentence would be better - in fact, would be made correct - if the colon were simply removed (ouch!). It wasn't until I was posting about error number one that I noticed the second error: Fortune 500 should be capitalized.
Tuesday, August 31, 2010
if fortune 500 companies such as: Microsoft and Google look for talent
The first error I noticed in this article ("Network using LinkedIn" in yesterday's 24H Vancouver) was the colon - why is it there? The sentence would be better - in fact, would be made correct - if the colon were simply removed (ouch!). It wasn't until I was posting about error number one that I noticed the second error: Fortune 500 should be capitalized.
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