This paragraph (from "Last-minute Labour Day getaways" in 24H Vancouver on August 31, 2010) is disastrous. First, there needs to be a comma after Ontario. Second, a is out of place. Third, the second abbreviation of September needs a period to match the one the first abbreviation got. Fourth, regular should be capitalized.
You Give Moms a Bad Name
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