The rest of the article is fine, but this one sentence is terrible. While it's mostly quoting a source, I believe strongly that all of the errors are the writer's alone, especially since the writer misspelled the source's name. It should be an accidental hit. It should either be could be avoided or could have been avoided. Back to that misspelled source - Melynk is actually Eugene Melnyk, owner of the Ottawa Senators. From "Melnyk: Ban headhunters for life" in 24 hours Vancouver on March 16, 2011.
Thursday, March 17, 2011
Because you're careless, 20-article suspension
The rest of the article is fine, but this one sentence is terrible. While it's mostly quoting a source, I believe strongly that all of the errors are the writer's alone, especially since the writer misspelled the source's name. It should be an accidental hit. It should either be could be avoided or could have been avoided. Back to that misspelled source - Melynk is actually Eugene Melnyk, owner of the Ottawa Senators. From "Melnyk: Ban headhunters for life" in 24 hours Vancouver on March 16, 2011.
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