The rest of the article is fine, but this one sentence is terrible. While it's mostly quoting a source, I believe strongly that all of the errors are the writer's alone, especially since the writer misspelled the source's name. It should be
an accidental hit. It should either be
could be avoided or
could have been avoided. Back to that misspelled source -
Melynk is actually Eugene Melnyk, owner of the Ottawa Senators. From "Melnyk: Ban headhunters for life" in
24 hours Vancouver on March 16, 2011.
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