Ugh. I don't understand how an article like this makes it to a news site for readers to read. The first three paragraphs of the article ("
Woman stranded overnight on Whistler gondola" on MSN Canada News on March 10, 2011) are above, and we'll start the corrections by noting that the opening sentence should have a comma immediately after
week. Next, the second sentence/paragraph should open with the word
The preceding 25-year-old woman. Later in that same sentence, is a person really capable of
downloading to a village? How does someone - how does
anything - download to a village? Surely that should be
descending. Then, in the second sentence of the second paragraph,
normal should be
normally. Finally, there is a missing word in the final sentence/paragraph;
a should be between
in and
cabin. Click the image to enlarge it.
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