The subject, team, doesn't agree with the verb, prove. The writer (of "Twisted Panties Test Drive" in today's 24H Vancouver) needs to add an S to the end of prove to prove to the readers that they can actually write. Also, is it Twisted Panties Test Drive or Twisted Panties Test-drive? Some consistency there would be a good thing.
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