Consider the following line, from "Light and heavy in 'Canadianess'" in 24H Vancouver on June 28, 2010: "there is no one who embodies the essence of big skies and the way your boots sound walking over fresh snow." Whether true or not, does it really belong in a blurb that is supposed to be about Neil Young? If the writer is trying to say that Neil Young is the embodiment, then perhaps the word better could be put in front of embodies.
Wednesday, June 30, 2010
there is no one who embodies the essence of big skies and the way your boots sound walking over fresh snow.
Consider the following line, from "Light and heavy in 'Canadianess'" in 24H Vancouver on June 28, 2010: "there is no one who embodies the essence of big skies and the way your boots sound walking over fresh snow." Whether true or not, does it really belong in a blurb that is supposed to be about Neil Young? If the writer is trying to say that Neil Young is the embodiment, then perhaps the word better could be put in front of embodies.
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