Consider the following line, from "Light and heavy in 'Canadianess'" in
24H Vancouver on June 28, 2010: "there is no one who embodies the essence of big skies and the way your boots sound walking over fresh snow." Whether true or not, does it really belong in a blurb that is supposed to be about Neil Young? If the writer is trying to say that Neil Young is the embodiment, then perhaps the word
better could be put in front of
embodies.
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