18 career tips the you might just want to put on your fridge; to keep you network alive

I don't think the parents of this writer (of "18 tips for the fridge" in 24H Vancouver on June 28, 2010) would want to put this on the fridge to show off their son's work. First the should be that. Then,

you do not have to do a lot to keep your writing free of errors - just simple proofreading.