Friday, November 20, 2009

who passed away at last Monday at the age of 92

-- "Lasting legacy" in Vancouver 24 hours on November 20, 2009

That is a very unfortunate place to add the extra word at. She passed away at last, eh? This is a prime example of why proofreading is important. The text surely should have read, who passed away last Monday at the age of 92.

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