From the article "Not a bad matchup" in
Vancouver 24 hours on October 28, 2009, we find incorrect information given to the reader about when the first game of the World Series takes place. It should read
tonight, not
tomorrow night. Which is to say it was actually on October 28, not the 29th as the writer seemed to think. I'm excited to watch Game 6 tomorrow night - see how that's done,
24 hours? I just gave correct information to all the readers (barring a rainout). Then, more problems:
WTF? That's a fact-filled sentence that needs some more punctuation, or perhaps an extensive rewrite into multipel sentences. Another error:
Power does not begin with a vowel sound - not even close - so turn
an into
a.
From the article "Not a bad matchup" in Vancouver 24 hours on October 28, 2009, we find incorrect information given to the reader about when the first game of the World Series takes place. It should read tonight, not tomorrow night. Which is to say it was actually on October 28, not the 29th as the writer seemed to think. I'm excited to watch Game 6 tomorrow night - see how that's done, 24 hours? I just gave correct information to all the readers (barring a rainout). Then, more problems:
WTF? That's a fact-filled sentence that needs some more punctuation, or perhaps an extensive rewrite into multipel sentences. Another error:
Power does not begin with a vowel sound - not even close - so turn an into a.
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