Hey,
Vancouver 24 hours - does this writer ever get proofread? Just look at her very first sentence (the first two words!) from today's article, "It's a SADD time of year".
It's that's time of the year? Holy shit. Best opening to an article ever. Bravo. Surprisingly, after that atrocious beginning there were only two more errors the rest of the way:
Compare the second half of the above sentence to my revised version: there
is no shortage
of reminders of this blessed month-long celebration. Mine is better, yes? I have some spare time for proofreading,
24 hours, so feel free to contact me.
Hey, Vancouver 24 hours - does this writer ever get proofread? Just look at her very first sentence (the first two words!) from today's article, "It's a SADD time of year". It's that's time of the year? Holy shit. Best opening to an article ever. Bravo. Surprisingly, after that atrocious beginning there were only two more errors the rest of the way:
Compare the second half of the above sentence to my revised version: there is no shortage of reminders of this blessed month-long celebration. Mine is better, yes? I have some spare time for proofreading, 24 hours, so feel free to contact me.
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