
Rapid action! Rapid action!
Breath should be
breathe! From "
Tubers rescued after falling in B.C. river" on
24 hours Vancouver online on May 17, 2011! Next!

In the penultimate sentence, I believe the word
film should be between
The and
screens! From "Shadbolt Centre's film series finale" in
24 hours Vancouver on May 12, 2011! Next!

It should be
role as a cat is a big step forward! From "Hayek and Banderas kick off Cannes" in
24 hours Vancouver on May 12, 2011! Next!

The word
said should be either before or after Wilson! And I believe that Wilson was misquoted and that the last sentence should read
That wasn't the case! From "Happy over homesick role" in
24 hours Vancouver on May 12, 2011! Next!
Diagnoses is plural - the writer wanted the singular
diagnosis! From "Earth is crowded" in
24 hours Vancouver on May 12, 2011! Later in the same article,
questioning it's existence should be
questioning its existence! No apostrophe! Next!

Nice try, Guts McTavish, but it's Kesler, not Kelser. From "5 on 5" in
24 hours Vancouver on May 12, 2011! Phew! We're done! Click an image to enlarge it.
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