On the cover of 24 hours Vancouver on May 9, 2011, there needs to be another question mark after the closing quotation mark. It may look funny, but there's a question within a question, so two question marks are needed. Then,
in "Apologizing for LiLo comment" in the same paper, there needs to be an apostrophe in Lohan's troubles, but that's the least of the troubles here. That whole sentence is actually a non-sentence. Click an image to enlarge it.
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