The above sentence (from "Improving on perfection" in 24 hours Vancouver on October 22, 2010) would be improved if the first em-dash and the first comma were swapped. Then,
lets needs an apostrophe to make it let's (which is a contraction of let us, as in let us make a night of it).
Walz Apostrophe Catastrophe
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