There is only one assailant, and he can't be both 28 and 32 years old. Methinks there needs to be a comma and then the word between after Caucasian. From "Assaults prompt warning on UBC campus" on CBC News online on October 9, 2010, which has been updated at least once with the error remaining.
Saturday, October 9, 2010
The assailant is described as Caucasian 28 and 32 years old
There is only one assailant, and he can't be both 28 and 32 years old. Methinks there needs to be a comma and then the word between after Caucasian. From "Assaults prompt warning on UBC campus" on CBC News online on October 9, 2010, which has been updated at least once with the error remaining.
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