job seekers have either come to me for resume rewriting or have already got great resumes; collect business card; you may be random people who may be

The writer (of "How to start a job search" in today's 24 hours Vancouver) should have either moved either to in front of the first have or eliminated the second have. Also,

business card should be business cards. As for social clubs, I'm pretty sure the first be is supposed to be meet. How does that go unnoticed during a proofreading?