The first error in this article ("GranFondo crash victim remains in coma" on CBC News online on September 15, 2010) occurs when the writer inserts an apostrophe into a simple plural. Then,
I think this could be corrected to slower riders might hold up faster ones. Next,
a word is missing from between he and motionless. I suggest laid. Finally,
and should clearly be an. Well, that's clear to me, but I don't write for CBC. Click an image to enlarge it.
Saturday, September 18, 2010
several European GranFondo's; slower riders might holding up faster ones; recognize him as he motionless on the side; he's and endurance athlete
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