
The first error in this article ("
GranFondo crash victim remains in coma" on
CBC News online on September 15, 2010) occurs when the writer inserts an apostrophe into a simple plural. Then,

I think this could be corrected to
slower riders might hold up faster ones. Next,

a word is missing from between
he and
motionless. I suggest
laid. Finally,
and should clearly be
an. Well, that's clear to me, but I don't write for CBC. Click an image to enlarge it.
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