This article about celebrating the holiday season - "Get gussied up for party season" in
24H Vancouver on December 11, 2009 - has a few errors. First, nondemoninational does not begin with a vowel sound, so it should be
a nondenominational floor party. Second, since the entire sentence is within the parentheses, the period at the very end of the above image should be placed inside the closing parenthesis. That's not all:
The third error of the article is the missing
a before
line, unless
drop 'em line is the opposite of
pick-up line.
This article about celebrating the holiday season - "Get gussied up for party season" in 24H Vancouver on December 11, 2009 - has a few errors. First, nondemoninational does not begin with a vowel sound, so it should be a nondenominational floor party. Second, since the entire sentence is within the parentheses, the period at the very end of the above image should be placed inside the closing parenthesis. That's not all:
The third error of the article is the missing a before line, unless drop 'em line is the opposite of pick-up line.
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