Friday, December 18, 2009

and their repeated used of a Taser; Kennedy said had concerns with; Kennedy has already release reports

The article "RCMP watchdog says Taser use against Dziekanski 'inappropriate'" on Yahoo! Canada News on December 8, 2009, appears to have been completely rewritten and given a new headline. Above, repeated used should be repeated use.

Then, the word he is missing after said,

and release needs a D at the end of it.

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