-- "What's on your mind?" in Vancouver 24 hours on August 5, 2009This crap was apparently written by a professional writer employed by a well-read newspaper. Astounding. "... you're apparently aren't too happy." Ugh. Suggestion: "... apparently you're not too happy." There are too many abouts. Suggestion: "... to the twittersphere for your thoughts about the HST." Overall suggestion: proofread.
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