pleasure when are together; "Recently, a wise man told me, 'Move through life fearlessly. Who you are cannot be injured."; how the pain-pleasure dicho

-- "Joy vs. pleasure: How do you define each?" in Vancouver 24 hours on August 5, 2009

There's a lot of work to do here, so let's get to work. First: when you are together. Second: the punctuation is off in the colorful quoted text; where's the single closing quotation mark after what the wise man said? Third: either omit how, or add works after dichotomy. Fourth: it's iPod, not IPOD.