Saturday, July 18, 2009

There are many ways fun ways for new couples to get from A to B on vacation. Car is not one of the them.

-- "Getaway a good couple test" in Vancouver 24 hours on July 17, 2009

Is there anyone at 24 hours who regularly proofreads their work? There are many ways to get your point across; intelligibly is the best way. The first error can be fixed by removing the first ways, but the final sentence is a tad trickier. Perhaps the writer attempted to write, Car is not one of them. However, car can definitely be a fun way, so I'd suggest writing, Car is not the only way.

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