-- "Police seek missing Surrey man" on Sympatico / MSN News on July 18, 2009
As you can see, the article says Mehay "was last seen on July 14," but the photo caption contradicts that statement by awkwardly stating that Mehay "has been seen or heard from since July 14." I'd say that the word not should be between has and been. I'd also say that the final sentence in the image should read in part, Mehay has no history of alcohol or drug abuse.
Saturday, July 18, 2009
Yashpal Mehay, 40, has been seen or heard from since July 14; Mehay has no history alcohol or drug abuse
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