Wednesday, July 29, 2009

DEBIT CARD GUESTS; All Our Customer's; All Debit Card Transaction

-- Dairy Queen in Park Royal Mall in West Vancouver, BC, Canada, on July 22, 2009

"Debit card guests"? Is the place called "Dairy Queen" or "Debit card"? It's the former, so I suggest writing "Debit card users" instead. Customers is merely the plural form of customer and therefore there should be no apostrophe before the S. Transaction should be in a plural form, but, again, be sure to add the S without placing an apostrophe. The capitalization of every word - except is?! - is making my head spin. On a positive note, the sign correctly states $0.25 instead of o.25¢.

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