Saturday, July 11, 2009

Jeremie, the chef is a genius and I am excited to witness the smiles on my friend's faces after they take their first bite

-- "Wow, a night out!" in Vancouver 24 hours on July 10, 2009

If the writer is identifying Jeremie as the chef, then a comma should be placed after chef, otherwise it seems the writer is addressing only Jeremie and omitting the chef's name. The article is about spending time with three friends, not just one friend, so the apostrophe should be after the S, for friends'. If you think your friend has more than one face, then you could probably use a night in. I'd say it's a good idea to proofread a few times more than usual when doing some after-a-night-out writing.

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