-- "Fox hooks up foodbank (need to know)" in Vancouver 24 hours on May 27, 2009There are several things wrong in this short blurb. While the food bank is no doubt great, it's called the Greater Vancouver Food Bank, as it represents not only Vancouver but the surrounding communities as well. Raymur is a street, but it's officially an Avenue. Finally, onsite should be on site.
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