As anyone can see immediately under the headline, this article ("Bush explains slow reaction to September 11 attacks" on Yahoo! Canada News on July 28, 2011) is written by Jill Serjeant. As anyone can see, this text immediately follows the article's final sentence: (Reporting by Jill Serjeant, editing by Anthony Boadle). Why can't anyone at Yahoo!, especially Jill or Anthony, see how the above sentence - just the third sentence in the article - is incomplete. There should either be more after blank face, or the word and that immediately precedes has should be jettisoned. Click the image to enlarge it.
Thursday, August 4, 2011
Two slow staffers
As anyone can see immediately under the headline, this article ("Bush explains slow reaction to September 11 attacks" on Yahoo! Canada News on July 28, 2011) is written by Jill Serjeant. As anyone can see, this text immediately follows the article's final sentence: (Reporting by Jill Serjeant, editing by Anthony Boadle). Why can't anyone at Yahoo!, especially Jill or Anthony, see how the above sentence - just the third sentence in the article - is incomplete. There should either be more after blank face, or the word and that immediately precedes has should be jettisoned. Click the image to enlarge it.
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