
There are three errors in this article ("
Teen kills self after accidentally shooting girlfriend" on MSN Canada News on April 14, 2011). First off, the third sentence/paragraph from this article is missing the word
that immediately before
was. Then,

three sentences/paragraphs later
death should be
deaths. Finally,

the third last paragraph doesn't make much sense. "Taylor and a friend cooked had dinner"? Click an image to enlarge it.
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