There are three errors in this article ("Teen kills self after accidentally shooting girlfriend" on MSN Canada News on April 14, 2011). First off, the third sentence/paragraph from this article is missing the word that immediately before was. Then,
three sentences/paragraphs later death should be deaths. Finally,
the third last paragraph doesn't make much sense. "Taylor and a friend cooked had dinner"? Click an image to enlarge it.
High on Writing
1 week ago