-- "Keeping up to speed" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 30, 2009
Another day, another then for than error in 24 hours' sports section. As a bonus, the writer puts a hyphen after an -ly adverb.
Thursday, April 30, 2009
Veterans like Mattias Ohlund, Sami Salo and Willie Mitchell are complimented by the likes of Kevin Bieksa, Alex Edler and Shane O'Brien
-- "Why the Canucks can win the cup" on NHL.com on April 29, 2009
I'd rather not know this much about the affections Vancouver defencemen have for each other. Further more, this sentence seems to be out of place from the theme of the rest of the article; perhaps the writer meant to use the word complemented instead of homophone complimented. Also, maybe you, the reader, are wondering why Alex Edler's name is the only name that's not a link. I think it's because the writer didn't use Alexander's full name.
I'd rather not know this much about the affections Vancouver defencemen have for each other. Further more, this sentence seems to be out of place from the theme of the rest of the article; perhaps the writer meant to use the word complemented instead of homophone complimented. Also, maybe you, the reader, are wondering why Alex Edler's name is the only name that's not a link. I think it's because the writer didn't use Alexander's full name.
Wednesday, April 29, 2009
agency said on Tuesday its was mobilizing its animal health experts
-- "Officials brace for more cases" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 29, 2009
At first I thought that the text was originally sans was, and its should have been changed to it after was's insertion. But then the first its should have been it's, so I'm at a loss. This is the start of the photo caption for a large front page photo.
At first I thought that the text was originally sans was, and its should have been changed to it after was's insertion. But then the first its should have been it's, so I'm at a loss. This is the start of the photo caption for a large front page photo.
Tuesday, April 28, 2009
the idylic Alpine countryside
-- "Swiss canton bans nude hiking" on Yahoo! Canada News on April 27, 2009
After I stroll naked through the idyllic Alpine countryside, ban be damned, I'll stroll up to the writer of idylic and give her the business.
After I stroll naked through the idyllic Alpine countryside, ban be damned, I'll stroll up to the writer of idylic and give her the business.
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207000 block of 36th Avenue in Langley
-- "Van into house (local news briefs)" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 28, 2009
There is no such thing as 207000 block of 36th Avenue in Langley. My best guess is that an extra zero was added to 20700.
There is no such thing as 207000 block of 36th Avenue in Langley. My best guess is that an extra zero was added to 20700.
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more concerned about the media then his own players
-- "Anxious for Round 2 action" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 28, 2009
Someone needs to talk to the 24 hours sports department at 24 hours because these then for than errors are getting out of hand. Please explain to the writers (and editors, if any) the differing definitions of then and than. It's never than for then., so I guess the writers figure then is a catchall.
Someone needs to talk to the 24 hours sports department at 24 hours because these then for than errors are getting out of hand. Please explain to the writers (and editors, if any) the differing definitions of then and than. It's never than for then., so I guess the writers figure then is a catchall.
America Ferrara
all the pressue is on Washington
-- NHL.com homepage on April 27, 2009
Was their intense deadline pressure that necessitated overlooking misspellings?
Was their intense deadline pressure that necessitated overlooking misspellings?
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Monday, April 27, 2009
perfectly-toned legs; How to get the perfectly toned legs; Excercises that will get your calves
-- Sympatico / MSN homepage on April 27, 2009
This is horrible. From the erroneously placed hyphen after an -ly adverb to the extra word (the - what, there are only two perfectly toned legs in the entire world? But at least the hyphen isn't present there) to the misspelled exercises, are there no proofreaders whatsoever at Sympatico / MSN?
This is horrible. From the erroneously placed hyphen after an -ly adverb to the extra word (the - what, there are only two perfectly toned legs in the entire world? But at least the hyphen isn't present there) to the misspelled exercises, are there no proofreaders whatsoever at Sympatico / MSN?
The top 'women driver' cliches
-- Yahoo! Canada homepage on April 26, 2009
Acceptable: woman driver and women drivers. Unacceptable: woman drivers and women driver. Of course Yahoo! went with one of the unacceptable ones.
Acceptable: woman driver and women drivers. Unacceptable: woman drivers and women driver. Of course Yahoo! went with one of the unacceptable ones.
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Games six airs Monday
The 1-1-2 Whitecaps hope to even their record
-- "First win of year" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 27, 2009
One win, one loss, and two ties is pretty much as even as a record can get. The only way to make it more even, I guess, is to have two wins, two losses, and two ties, but that can't happen after just one game.
One win, one loss, and two ties is pretty much as even as a record can get. The only way to make it more even, I guess, is to have two wins, two losses, and two ties, but that can't happen after just one game.
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They duo were originally married
win the battle but loose the war
Saturday, April 25, 2009
Alberta's admits ad blunder
-- Yahoo! Canada homepage on April 24, 2009
Speaking of blunders, Alberta's is incorrect here. My guess is that the text was originally Alberta's ad blunder, with admits being inserted afterwards. Necessary alterations after the insertion of admits: omitting 's after Alberta.
Speaking of blunders, Alberta's is incorrect here. My guess is that the text was originally Alberta's ad blunder, with admits being inserted afterwards. Necessary alterations after the insertion of admits: omitting 's after Alberta.
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How to kid from developing a video game addiction
-- Yahoo! Shine homepage on April 24, 2009
Uhh, what? After clicking the link to find out what the hell the writer was on about, I find an article titled, 5 Ways to Prevent Video Game Addiction in Your Child. Okay, so maybe the teaser should have keep your between to and kid.
Uhh, what? After clicking the link to find out what the hell the writer was on about, I find an article titled, 5 Ways to Prevent Video Game Addiction in Your Child. Okay, so maybe the teaser should have keep your between to and kid.
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an already red-hot goaltentender
-- "Hoist one for Bobby Lu" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 23, 2009
Is this the writer's subtle (or subliminal? or sloppy?) way of telling readers that he would rate goaltender Roberto Luongo's play of late as being ten out of ten?
Is this the writer's subtle (or subliminal? or sloppy?) way of telling readers that he would rate goaltender Roberto Luongo's play of late as being ten out of ten?
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Premier Gordon Cammpbell
a follow up to the his 2003 release The Natashas: Inside the Global Sex Trade; Malerak; easier said then done
-- "Seasoned journalist takes johns to task" in The Vancouver Courier on April 22, 2009
Aren't writers encouraged to proofread their own work before publishing? Aren't they (also) encouraged to get someone they trust to proofread their work before publishing? Don't newspapers - all newspapers - have editors? In the first image, there is an extra word; his was probably meant to replace the, but both are present. Amazon.ca tells me that there are two books by Malarek with similar titles: The Natashas: The New Global Sex Trade, and The Natashas: Inside the New Global Sex Trade. The title of his earlier work that is given in the article is not found on Amazon.
Second image: the first five times Victor's last name is written in the article, it's Malarek. The sixth time, it's Malerak. The seventh and eighth times, it's Malarek. The ninth and tenth times, it's Malerak. The good news is that the writer was correct 70% of the time. The bad news is that the writer was incorrect 30% of the time. Third image: seeing then when it should be than (but never vice versa) is becoming a frequent occurrence. I find it easy to use the correct word, as then and than do not have similar meanings.
Aren't writers encouraged to proofread their own work before publishing? Aren't they (also) encouraged to get someone they trust to proofread their work before publishing? Don't newspapers - all newspapers - have editors? In the first image, there is an extra word; his was probably meant to replace the, but both are present. Amazon.ca tells me that there are two books by Malarek with similar titles: The Natashas: The New Global Sex Trade, and The Natashas: Inside the New Global Sex Trade. The title of his earlier work that is given in the article is not found on Amazon.
Second image: the first five times Victor's last name is written in the article, it's Malarek. The sixth time, it's Malerak. The seventh and eighth times, it's Malarek. The ninth and tenth times, it's Malerak. The good news is that the writer was correct 70% of the time. The bad news is that the writer was incorrect 30% of the time. Third image: seeing then when it should be than (but never vice versa) is becoming a frequent occurrence. I find it easy to use the correct word, as then and than do not have similar meanings.
Friday, April 24, 2009
former pitcher Jim Bouton says Bouton says
-- "Where have baseball’s characters gone?" on NBC Sports online (nbcsports.msnbc.com) on April 13, 2009
Looks to me like NBC Sports wants Sports wants to be on Detected Errors - mission accomplished! The error is still there today despite the article being updated at least once.
Looks to me like NBC Sports wants Sports wants to be on Detected Errors - mission accomplished! The error is still there today despite the article being updated at least once.
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a host of new onese
-- "Extra mystery (television briefs)" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 24, 2009
I've got a question: what does onese mean? Assuming it's a typo, is the correct word ones or obese? Man, sentences would be easier to understand if writers simply wrote what they meant.
I've got a question: what does onese mean? Assuming it's a typo, is the correct word ones or obese? Man, sentences would be easier to understand if writers simply wrote what they meant.
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The Soloists
There was apparently no signs of forced entry.
Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Earth Day has become a unofficial holiday
The win gives Detroit in a solid 3-0 series lead going into Game 4.
a review of police and RCMP reports indicate
-- "Bullets versus ballots" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 22, 2009
Take away of police and RCMP reports and you're left with a review indicate there, which is obviously wrong. The obviousness is obscured by RCMP reports, which indeed would necessitate the S-less indicate. However, the sentence's subject is a review, so the spelling should be indicates.
Take away of police and RCMP reports and you're left with a review indicate there, which is obviously wrong. The obviousness is obscured by RCMP reports, which indeed would necessitate the S-less indicate. However, the sentence's subject is a review, so the spelling should be indicates.
Tuesday, April 21, 2009
police officer's will allow between 9 and 15 km's over; a small number of driver's will flash their headlights
-- "How to Avoid a Speeding Ticket" on Yahoo! Canada Autos on April 21, 2009
When writing a plural word, you do not add an apostrophe before the S, so in the first image police officer's should be police officers. While km's is tricky, because kms just doesn't look right, one could write either kilometres or KMs.
In the second image, the writer correctly wrote the plural drivers, but then for some reason wrote driver's two sentences later. Driver's is only correct when writing about something possessed by the driver, as in driver's seat.
When writing a plural word, you do not add an apostrophe before the S, so in the first image police officer's should be police officers. While km's is tricky, because kms just doesn't look right, one could write either kilometres or KMs.
In the second image, the writer correctly wrote the plural drivers, but then for some reason wrote driver's two sentences later. Driver's is only correct when writing about something possessed by the driver, as in driver's seat.
What did you do at 4:20 Monday? Smoked a spliff; Didn't smoke a spliff; Hmmm, working?
-- "Online poll" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 21, 2009
One of these things is not like the others. The last option should be, Hmmm, worked? If the question was changed to What were you doing at 4:20 Monday?, then Hmmm, working? would be a correct option. But in that case, the first two options would have to be changed to Smoking a spliff and Not smoking a spliff.
One of these things is not like the others. The last option should be, Hmmm, worked? If the question was changed to What were you doing at 4:20 Monday?, then Hmmm, working? would be a correct option. But in that case, the first two options would have to be changed to Smoking a spliff and Not smoking a spliff.
If the Blues can delay the broom, the series will return to Vancouver for game five on Thursday night.
-- "Vancouver readies the broom" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 21, 2009
Umm, no. When it comes to a playoff sweep (one team winning the first four games of a best-of-seven), it is impossible to delay the broom when down three games to none. If the Blues do win tonight, then they can not be swept. Hence, the Blues can prevent the broom, but not delay the broom
Umm, no. When it comes to a playoff sweep (one team winning the first four games of a best-of-seven), it is impossible to delay the broom when down three games to none. If the Blues do win tonight, then they can not be swept. Hence, the Blues can prevent the broom, but not delay the broom
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The group is encouraging it's "In the Driver's Seat" workshops
(Fans even conducted an online petition begging Marvel to give Howard his role back).
-- "Toe to toe with Terrence Howard" in Famous, April 2009
The sentence is contained entirely within parentheses, so the period should be immediately after back.
The sentence is contained entirely within parentheses, so the period should be immediately after back.
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Monday, April 20, 2009
COREY MILLER, right, of the A&E Channel TV show L.A. Ink meet fans
-- Photo caption on page 3 of Vancouver 24 hours on April 20, 2009
I wrote too soon in the last post; I found more errors on page 3 of today's Vancouver 24 hours. First there's the disagreement of Corey Miller meet fans, even though he correctly signs autographs immediately after. Meet needs an S. Also, some quick online research tells me that the show Miller is in is LA Ink - no periods.
I wrote too soon in the last post; I found more errors on page 3 of today's Vancouver 24 hours. First there's the disagreement of Corey Miller meet fans, even though he correctly signs autographs immediately after. Meet needs an S. Also, some quick online research tells me that the show Miller is in is LA Ink - no periods.
the 10K marathon
-- "Kenyan comes in first at Sun Run" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 20, 2009
Ridiculous. The word marathon is not a synonym for race or run. A marathon is a foot race that covers 26.2 miles (42.1 kilometres), and therefore a 10K marathon is an impossibility wrapped in nonsense inside an oxymoron.
This is the third of three errors I detected in today's Vancouver 24 hours. All three errors are on page 3 and two of them are misspelled names of murdered women.
Ridiculous. The word marathon is not a synonym for race or run. A marathon is a foot race that covers 26.2 miles (42.1 kilometres), and therefore a 10K marathon is an impossibility wrapped in nonsense inside an oxymoron.
This is the third of three errors I detected in today's Vancouver 24 hours. All three errors are on page 3 and two of them are misspelled names of murdered women.
Reena Kirk
Wendy Lander-Beaudry
Sunday, April 19, 2009
Cdns harrassed
-- Yahoo! Canada homepage on April 19, 2009
Canadians are harassed far too often by careless misspellings on Yahoo!'s web pages.
Canadians are harassed far too often by careless misspellings on Yahoo!'s web pages.
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SORRY FOR ANY INCONVIENCE
I know Canadians knows; bare a grudge
-- "Poundstone goes interactive" in The Vancouver Courier on April 15, 2009
The text above is part of a Paula Poundstone quote. I doubt she said Canadians knows instead of the correct-in-agreement Canadians know. The words bear and bare bear a sonic resemblance, but the writer should know that the phrase is bear a grudge, not bare a grudge.
The text above is part of a Paula Poundstone quote. I doubt she said Canadians knows instead of the correct-in-agreement Canadians know. The words bear and bare bear a sonic resemblance, but the writer should know that the phrase is bear a grudge, not bare a grudge.
Friday, April 17, 2009
More than 40 former New York Yankees, ringed the infield
Heidi Klum her husband Seal are expecting
-- "Klum expecting" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 17, 2009
I'm expecting there to be an and after Heidi Klum.
I'm expecting there to be an and after Heidi Klum.
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There are must-haves; however, and that's only
GAY MARRAIGE
-- "need to know" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 17, 2009
Great idea! If some U.S. states won't allow gay marriage, maybe gay marraige can be snuck by them.
Great idea! If some U.S. states won't allow gay marriage, maybe gay marraige can be snuck by them.
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they had no seen the lawsuit
-- "Fan sues NYPD; kicked out of Yankee Stadium for using restroom during 'God Bless America' - suit" on NYDailyNews.com on April 17, 2009
I'm amused by online article's that indicate the article has been updated, yet errors are present. Were the errors there all along and looked over, or did they pop up after the updating? In this case, no should be not.
I'm amused by online article's that indicate the article has been updated, yet errors are present. Were the errors there all along and looked over, or did they pop up after the updating? In this case, no should be not.
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Thursday, April 16, 2009
Tyson Sexmith; defensemen Nick Ross
-- "Giants win Game 7 showdown" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 15, 2009
The Vancouver goaltender who shut out Spokane in a game seven to help get the Giants into the third round is Tyson Sexsmith. The writers and editors at 24 hours continue to show their ignorance regarding the difference between defensemen and defenseman.
The Vancouver goaltender who shut out Spokane in a game seven to help get the Giants into the third round is Tyson Sexsmith. The writers and editors at 24 hours continue to show their ignorance regarding the difference between defensemen and defenseman.
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