-- "Today's celeb birthdays" in Vancouver 24 hours on April 6, 2009I realize that this small section of the paper is usually completed with half a brain engaged. The trick, though, is engaging only half the brain while still completing the section correctly. Only one is is needed after Paul Rudd, and how 'bout separating Zach Braff from is and removing the boldness from the latter. While we're at it, why a period only after the middle sentence? A lot of errors for such a small, easy piece.
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