"the brief pause it Britney's set. "Crew members above the stage became ill due to a ventilation issue." // said one fan from Kelowna told CTV News

-- "Britney apologizes for pause during Vancouver concert" on Sympatico / MSN News on April 9, 2009

I looked up the statement and it correctly says there was a brief pause in, not it, Britney's set. Also, get rid of the opening quotation mark before Crew. For the second image, to prevent redundancy omit either said or told CTV News. Can anyone explain to me why this was posted on MSN News and not MSN Entertainment?