Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Not much right

In the first paragraph, the street name is Arlington. In the second paragraph, 20s should not have an apostrophe. In the third paragraph, identify should be identity. In the fourth paragraph, Houghton's first name is Lindsey and the area is Champlain Heights. I had to screen capture almost the entire article - only the first and last paragraphs were error-free. From "Man shot dead in Vancouver's 8th homicide" on CBC News online on July 26, 2011. Click the image to enlarge it.

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