The obvious error here is
was, which no doubt is supposed to be
who. But less obvious, from my point of view, is
their valuables. The valuables belong to "a woman" so shouldn't it be
her valuables? The other corrective option is to change
tricks a woman into a date to
tricks women into dates and leaving
their valuables as-is. From "Date gone bad" in
24 hours Vancouver on January 24, 2011.
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