Okay, so the second paragraph (from "Vancouver disabled man loses $7,000 gear" on CBC News online on January 27, 2011) tells readers that the device was lost in the 200 block of E. King Edward Avenue. Then, two paragraphs later,
readers are told that staff went "back" to King Edward Avenue and Columbia Street. The problem is that the 200 block of E. King Edward Avenue is between Main Street and Sophia Street. Columbia Street is located at 200 W. King Edward. Click an image to enlarge it.
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