This sentence - from "What have you done with Mr. Belvedere?" in yesterday's
24H Vancouver - needs a period after the parentheses or, better yet, jettison the parentheses altogether and put a dash between
treatment and
and. There is also a missing word. That word is
to - can you figure out where it's supposed to go? This is kind of like a literary version of Pin The Tail On The Donkey. I'd say there's also a comma missing, from after
it. Do you agree or disagree?
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