What's the key to writing a bad headline? Just ask the writer of the above headline, which appeared on the front cover - yes, the front cover - of yesterday's 24H Vancouver. It should be either Patience key to scoring a gold-medal deal or Patience key to scoring gold-medal deals. Can you see the difference? It's reminiscent of another front-cover headline from the same paper.
Tuesday, March 30, 2010
Patience key to scoring a gold-medal deals
What's the key to writing a bad headline? Just ask the writer of the above headline, which appeared on the front cover - yes, the front cover - of yesterday's 24H Vancouver. It should be either Patience key to scoring a gold-medal deal or Patience key to scoring gold-medal deals. Can you see the difference? It's reminiscent of another front-cover headline from the same paper.
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