The errors in this piece just kept popping up. At first I just noticed the discrepancy between what the writer says Matwick drew, and what Matwick says about what she drew. They agree on a star and a rainbow, but was there a bird or a flower or both? Looking again at what the writer says Matwick drew, there should be an a in front of bird, and in front of rainbow there should be and a. Also, I'm not sure if I'm spelling Matwick's name correctly, because the writer has it once as Matwick and once as Mattwick.
A couple of S’s?
12 hours ago