The second sentence has poor structure; the writer would fail English 101. A way to pass would be to change the opening to, The greatest hits compilation features 12 of her solo hits...
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The second sentence has poor structure; the writer would fail English 101. A way to pass would be to change the opening to, The greatest hits compilation features 12 of her solo hits...
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