Six words: Was someone paid to write this?
The answer is probably "yes," because there is a name attached to the article. And now, quickly, the corrections. Plural of contributor is contributors, sans apostrophe. Mom and dad are two jobs. I would've accepted parent as a three-words-for-one trade. Insert as after such, and take the period that is currently after literal and put it after the closing parenthesis.
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