Corrections: reproduction ... long-lasting ... at the corner of ... forced its removal
I am in awe. Four errors in one average-length sentence.
Correction: always so sparse
How on Earth did Seale get that pronunciation so very wrong?
This commercial has played many times during the Olympics on at least two channels in the Vancouver market (CBC3 and Global11). In the long shot the boy who wants to be a mascot is holding the glass with his right hand. In the glass's close-up a left hand is holding the cup. See it to believe it.
Corrections: there are plenty of new attractions; performance of The Jungle Book
Consider the singular, there is a new attraction, and the plural, there are new attractions. And would the writer have written performance of the Hamlet?
Correction: NBC's portrayal of the fireworks
This is the sixth and final consecutive post featuring errors detected in Wednesday's 24 Hours Vancouver. Writers and editors, please form a circle. Each of you please put your right arm out so that it's parallel to the ground. Now pat the back of the person to your right.
Correction: "The child on the screen ... in her expression," said Chen.
Correction: specify specific times
Correction: an ex-marine