Two things. First thing: the word
when should be inserted between
joking and
they. Second thing: The coworkers won 1 million what? 1 million kittens? 1 million Timbits? 1 million suitcases each containing 1 million dollars? When your article (post?) consists of a video and one short sentence, you should probably make sure that sentence makes sense. From "
Office Lotto Winners Share Wealth With Coworker Who Opted Out" on Yahoo! Canada News on March 28, 2013. Click the image to enlarge it.
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