It should be either
said Grant's spokeswoman in an e-mail or
Grant's spokeswoman said in an e-mail. It shouldn't be a combination of both. From "
Hugh Grant is new father of baby girl" on Yahoo! Canada News on November 1, 2011. Then,
the article's final sentence has me scratching my head for more than one reason.
A quiet year so far in his career? What does that mean? And I think the word
an is missing from between
in and
animated. Pretty crap writing, especially considering there are two names attached to this five-paragraph article. Also,
going back to the top of the article, why is the editor's name the one attached to this and not the person who did the reporting and writing? Click an image to enlarge it.
It should be either said Grant's spokeswoman in an e-mail or Grant's spokeswoman said in an e-mail. It shouldn't be a combination of both. From "Hugh Grant is new father of baby girl" on Yahoo! Canada News on November 1, 2011. Then,
the article's final sentence has me scratching my head for more than one reason. A quiet year so far in his career? What does that mean? And I think the word an is missing from between in and animated. Pretty crap writing, especially considering there are two names attached to this five-paragraph article. Also,
going back to the top of the article, why is the editor's name the one attached to this and not the person who did the reporting and writing? Click an image to enlarge it.
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