Located in one of Vancouver's most famous tourist attractions, the Queen Elizabeth Pitch & Putt offers beautiful city vistas in the midst of unique trees like the Ginkgo. These beautiful broad-leaf deciduous trees provide ample shade in the summer months and transitions to a brilliant gold in the fall, adding to the spectacular scenery in the park.
The 18 short, contoured par 3s (none over 110 yards), are set along a course where there are no hazards in play, making this a perfect course for those new to the game.
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The Pro Shop offers club and caddy rentals, as well ball and tee sales. No advanced tee time bookings are required to enjoy this splendid course. No club rentals two hours before sunset. Twilight hour rates apply one hour before sunset. A selection of light snacks and refreshments are also available.
-- Queen Elizabeth Pitch & Putt, Tuesday April 22nd 2008
I suppose unique isn't wrong per se, but maybe superfluous? I guess water, sand bunkers, and trees don't fall under Queen E's definition of hazards. A selection (singular)... is (omit also) available. Or, omit A selection of and also to leave the better (in my opinion), Light snacks and refreshments are available.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008
unique trees // no hazards in play // a selection... are also available
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