You Give Moms a Bad Name
11 months ago
Ladies and gentlemen, are you ready? Ready for a collection of the errors I found on the CBC British Columbia homepage during March 2012? Yes, you say? Okay, let's begin. First up, from March 16, teacher got repeated. Then,
on March 20 there was a misspelled heavy and a misspelled Hope. Then,
after clicking to that last teaser's article ("Snow closes section of B.C.'s Coquihalla Highway" on CBC News online on March 20, 2012), I found a first sentence in which heavy and Hope were correct, but Merritt - which was fine on the homepage - was missing a T. Then,
on March 26 the homepage's top story included incorrect wording: has the quit party should have been has quit the party. Then,
on March 27 I was confused by what was meant by in British C.C. at the end of the sentence. But,
after clicking to the article ("RCMP face sexual harassment class-action suit" on CBC News online on March 27, 2012), it was made clear. Though I don't understand how British C.C. got past the eyes of anybody. Then,
on March 30, lead should have been led. Then,
when I clicked to that article ("RCMP regret dropped child sex abuse charges" on CBC News online on March 30, 2012), I see that the first sentence is almost identical to the homepage, except led is now correct! However, Turpel-Lafond is introduced to readers in the article's second sentence, and then has an E added to the end of her name in the very next sentence. Click an image to enlarge it.
The name of the player who was suspended for elbowing Daniel Sedin is Duncan Keith. From the photo caption at the top of "Canucks' coach confirms Daniel Sedin has concussion" on CBC Sports online on March 26, 2012. Click the image to enlarge it.
Here now are a few more errors that were detected on the CBC British Columbia homepage. All the homepage errors were repeated in the associated article's first sentence. First up, I saw a misspelled condition on August 3, 2011. Then,
on August 10, 2011, I think the word used should have been used here, right after the word hours. Then,
on August 18, 2011, the word is was missing from between she and going. Then,
on August 19, 2011, YouTube was capitalized correctly half the time, and I think the words potentially and a should have swapped places. Then,
on August 22, 2011, hims should have been S-less. Also, why was it road rage driver (without a hyphen) but road-rage incident (with a hyphen)? When I clicked to - and read - the article ("Road rage driver pins B.C. man against car" on CBC News online on August 22, 2011),
the word he should have been in existence between said and was. Then,
on August 25, 2011, the first new should have been spotted and removed. In the article itself ("Increasing painkiller use alarms B.C. expert" on CBC News online on August 25, 2011),
near the end there is a sudden capitalization issue affecting Vancouver and
i (which should be me but don't blame the writer - s/he is quoting a speaker, who happens to be a university professor). Then,
on August 27, 2011, an should be a. When it comes to the associated articles, all the first sentences have been fixed, except this one - see for yourself: "B.C. boating accident kills Edmonton girl" on CBC News online. Click an image to enlarge it.
First things first, the original headline of this article - "BC Ferries losses rise as passengers drop" on CBC News online on August 18, 2011 - had the word drop instead of dwindle; I guess CBC realized that talking about passengers dropping in association with ferries wasn't a good connection. "Man overboard!" Whereas the headline correctly has BC Ferries, the article opens with B.C. Ferries. Then,
a couple of swaps are in order: 2011/10 should be 2010/11 and says recent the drop should be says the recent drop and I think the second sentence could be restructured to have less ands and then it would flow better. Then,
what are risking fares? Are they anything like rising fares? Finally,
in the article's penultimate sentence, it should be dismissed. Click an image to enlarge it.